Post by aanggangmember27 on Nov 24, 2006 11:28:28 GMT -5
Hey guy's this is a story, that I am still trying to finish, about how Aang would feel/react if Katara would ever be taken away from him. (It's also at avatar portal by the way) Here is what I have so far:
Part 1 Scene 1
-(scene opens with 2 firenation soldiers crouching behind bushes that hide them from the view of the sleeping group (aang, katara, toph, and sokka))
(rustling noises)
FireNation Soldier 1- "Shhh, keep quiet you idiot, do you want to wake them up?"
FireNation Soldier 2- "Not really, not after the stories I heard about him (points to Aang) in the invasion of The Northern Water Tribe."
FireNation Soldier 1- "Yeah I heard he turned into some kind of monster, like a sea monster or something."
FireNation Soldier 2- "Ok now I'm totaly creeped out, lets grab the girl and get the hell out of here before that thing wakes up and kills us."
FireNation Soldier 1- "Alright lets go"
(the 2 soldiers close in on the sleeping katara, poke her suddenly so that she wakes up, when one of the soldier hits her with his spear's butt on the back of her head knocking her unconcience. They gag and bind her, throw her in a sack and begin to drag her away when aang suddenly rolls over in his sleep, causing both soldiers to pause in dead fear, and only continue in dragging her away after half-an-hour of complete silence)
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(It is now morning around the group, minus 1, and toph is the first to wake up)
Toph- "(yawns) Good morning guys..........oh.......you are all still a sleep, well if you don't mind I'm going to go get my breakfast, you two lazy bums."
(toph walks into the woods)
(a little while later aang and sokka wake up at roughly the same time)
Aang- "Morning Appa, buddy it looks like clear skies today for flying, it outta be nice."
Sokka- "Aang do you always wake up and say hello Appa right away?"
Aang- "Of course Sokka, why?"
Sokka- "'Cause you know he can't understand you right?"
Aang- "Oh no Appa understands every word that I say........or at least I understand his."
Sokka- "That's what frightens me" he says sarcasticly
(Toph returns)
Toph- "Oh so now the two tired people wake up!"
Sokka- "Just because we sleep a little longer than you Toph doesn't mean we are more tired."
Toph- "Yeah whatever, hey where is Katara, I haven't seen her all morning."
Aang- "She's probably down by the river, she likes to practice her waterbending early in the morning."
Toph- "No I don't think so, I was just by the river looking for food, and I didn't see her, and besides she always brings her scrolls down with her to review the basics, and they are still......wait whats that?
(Toph had just looked at katara's sleeping bag and noticed a dagger stabbed into it with a note attached)
Sokka- "I don't know"
(Aang jumps over to the note, rips it off of the dagger and starts furiously reading, while Sokka and toph run over)
(Aang finishes reading the note and immediatly hands it to sokka who reads it aloud to Toph, while aang takes a few steps away from the camp site)
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Alright here is the secound part of part one:
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(Sokka, Toph and Aang are around the camp site, Sokka and toph talk about what to do while Aang seems almost paralyzed by reflection a little farther away from sokka and toph)
(sokka reads)
Dear Children,
When you woke this morning you might have noticed one of your beloved members is missing. The girl is now ours. All of the trouble you Avatar, have put the firenation through, shall be repayed in full on the girl.
FireNation
Toph- "This is terrible!"
Sokka- "Oh no.........Katara.....(he pauses and reflects).....we have got to save her!"
Toph- "She will be tortured for sure! So we've got to do it fast!"
Sokka- "I know! But we need a plan we can't just go charging blindly off in some direction hoping to find her!"
Toph- "Your right................ok plan-guy what do we do?"
Sokka- "Why do you always depend on me to come up with the plan?...................Anyway that doesn't matter now..............Maybe they left a trail, we could look for one"
(Sokka starts wandering in circles)
Sokka- "Do you see anything Toph........oh wait never mind.........well do your feet see anything?"
Toph- "No............Do you see anything Aang?..................Aang?.................AAAAANNNNGG!!!!!!!!!!"
(A strong gust of wind blows randomly from Aang, strong enough to knock both Toph and Sokka back, destroy the camp site, and uproot a couple of trees)
Sokka- (angrily)"Aang what was that ............................................. Oh no!............."
(Sokka turns around to notice the glow in Aang's tatoos and eyes)
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(meanwhile, aboard a firenation ship about three miles out from the river delta (which the group is camped near) the two fire nation soldiers who kidnapped katara walk down one of it's long halls)
-FireNation Soldier 2- ".......I still don't think it was a bright idea for the admiral to kidnap this girl"
-FireNation Soldier 1-"UGGGHHH......How many times do I have to tell you that it was a brilliant Idea"
-FireNation Soldier 2- "Why in the world would you think that?"
-FireNation Soldier 1-"Of course it's a brillieant Idea, She is perfect bait for the avatar, when he comes with his friends to rescue her, BAM!, we drop like a hammer on them and gift wrap them for the fire lord."
-FireNation Soldier 2-"Yeah thats good in theory in all, but what if this girl is the avatar's Concentration, then he will destroy us!"
-Firenation Soldier 1-"Concentration?.......What is this Gibberish?"
-Firenation soldier 2-"The avatar's concentration is the focal point of all of the avatars feelings, especially love. There are ancient stories of the ammount of rage an avatar has unleashed when it's Concentration was taken away or even just hurt, and that is what I am worried about, what IF this girl is his Concentration?"
-Firenation soldier 1-"I don't think so."
(they arrive at the door they were looking for and go in, to find katara chained to a wall)
-Katara- "Let me go!"
-Firenation Soldier 1-"Well well, look who is awake"
(Firenation soldier 2 laughs)
-Katara-"Oh we're not deaf, we definitly heard you, but we are not aloud to do anything until the Admiral comes to look at his new prisoner"
(both firenation soldiers laugh)
-Katara-'Well tell your big-headed admiral to get down here!"
-Admiral-"Why don't you tell me yourself?"
(both firenation soldiers bow in respect)
-Katara-"What no! Your dead!
-Admiral- "Did you miss me Katara?"
-Katara-"ZHAO!!!!"
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Alright, here it is finally: Part 1 of Chapter 2!
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(Aang, Sokka and Toph are at the campsite,Aang has just entered the avatar state and something is different about it, Toph and Sokka are hidden behind a large boulder from the air Aang is bending)
-Sokka: "AAAAAAANNNNNGGGG!!!........Can you hear me?!?!........
dangit........ (to Toph) I don't get it.........I've seen Aang go into the Avatar State at least 5 times, but he has never been this powerful before!"
-Toph: (to Sokka) "Uh, hello (knocks on his head), don't you realize that it is because katara isn't here?"
-Sokka: "What are you talking about?"
-Toph: "Ugh!.........don't tell me that you don't know!"
-Sokka: "Know about what?"
-Toph: "About Aang and Katara!"
-Sokka: "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?"
-Toph: "*sigh*, Your kidding right?"
-Sokka: "NO, JUST TELL ME!"
-Toph: "OK, OK, Aang is in love with Katara!"
-Sokka: "..........Your kidding right?"
-Toph: "Far from it......."
-Sokka: "Well that would explain this........."
(they both pause to look at Aang who is now in the sky surrounded by an air bubble, they are pretty far away from him, but they both can easily tell the look sheer anger and pain in Aang's face)
-Sokka: ".........And how does Katara feel about this."
-Toph: ".......I don't know....."
(something new starts happening, a twister begins to form around Aang, sucking in everything around it, well almost everything)
-Sokka: "WHOA!....... Aangs going to suck us in!"
-Toph: "No he's not!" (she forms an earth tent around them)
-Sokka: "*sigh*......thanks.......but he is going to destroy everything!"
-Toph: "I'm not to sure about that"
-Sokka: "Now what are you talking about?"
-Toph: "It's just the vibrations I'm getting, it feels like he is gaining it's control......."
-Sokka: "..........You are completely insane......." (says sarcasticly)
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(Katara is still chained to the wall, and is forced to talk to Admiral Zhao, the two FireNation Soldiers are there too)
-Katara: "How did you live?!.....And then escape?!"
-Zhao: "Oh it was quite simple really, the monster did not drag me down all the way, but actually dissapated almost just after I entered the freezing water, I swam back up and spotted a dum-witted watertribe so-called warrior, knocked him out from behind, changed into his clothes, and snuck easily out of the tribe, only to find one lucky FireNation battleship unscathed with a perfectly good crew to go along with it, and then I tracked you."
-Katara: "Well then, what do you want with me!?!"
-Zhao: "Have you ever gone fishing before, Katara?"
-Katara: "What are you talking about?"
-Zhao: "Fishing, where you use a hook, line and bait to catch your prey."
-Katara: "Uhh yes, but what does that have to do with anything?"
-Zhao: "My entire plan revolves around this concept, you see, you are the perfect bait for my type of fish."
-Katara: (thinks out loud) "..........Aang!"
-Zhao: "Very good katara, the young Avatar is my prey, and you see, his feelings for you shall cause him to fall victim to my trap, you see my pretty (grabs katara's face and talks into it), as soon as your friends, the Avatar and the rest of your pathetic little gang, discover this so obviously placed ship, 13 garrisons of my best troops shall descend upon them and burn them to a crisp before your friend has anytime at all to even suck in any air."
-Katara: ".......YOU MONSTER!!!" (she starts crying)
(the two firenation soldiers laugh)
-Zhao: ".........and there is not a thing you can do about it"
--Intercom: "Admiral, we're have some strange weather up here."
-Zhao: "I'm on my way, (to the two soldiers) bring the girl."
(they all walk up to the main deck of the ship, with the two soldiers dragging and hurting Katara the entire way"
-Zhao: "What's going on up here?"
-Helmsman: "Well sir, it's that twister in the distance."
-Zhao: "What, but the weather is supposed to be clear skies today, what could have caused this!"
-Katara: (with tears in her eyes, and looking at the twister) "Aang............."
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Well that's it, hope you enjoyed it, I will post Part 2 of Chapter 2 shortly, but please leave comments!!!!!
Part 1 Scene 1
-(scene opens with 2 firenation soldiers crouching behind bushes that hide them from the view of the sleeping group (aang, katara, toph, and sokka))
(rustling noises)
FireNation Soldier 1- "Shhh, keep quiet you idiot, do you want to wake them up?"
FireNation Soldier 2- "Not really, not after the stories I heard about him (points to Aang) in the invasion of The Northern Water Tribe."
FireNation Soldier 1- "Yeah I heard he turned into some kind of monster, like a sea monster or something."
FireNation Soldier 2- "Ok now I'm totaly creeped out, lets grab the girl and get the hell out of here before that thing wakes up and kills us."
FireNation Soldier 1- "Alright lets go"
(the 2 soldiers close in on the sleeping katara, poke her suddenly so that she wakes up, when one of the soldier hits her with his spear's butt on the back of her head knocking her unconcience. They gag and bind her, throw her in a sack and begin to drag her away when aang suddenly rolls over in his sleep, causing both soldiers to pause in dead fear, and only continue in dragging her away after half-an-hour of complete silence)
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(It is now morning around the group, minus 1, and toph is the first to wake up)
Toph- "(yawns) Good morning guys..........oh.......you are all still a sleep, well if you don't mind I'm going to go get my breakfast, you two lazy bums."
(toph walks into the woods)
(a little while later aang and sokka wake up at roughly the same time)
Aang- "Morning Appa, buddy it looks like clear skies today for flying, it outta be nice."
Sokka- "Aang do you always wake up and say hello Appa right away?"
Aang- "Of course Sokka, why?"
Sokka- "'Cause you know he can't understand you right?"
Aang- "Oh no Appa understands every word that I say........or at least I understand his."
Sokka- "That's what frightens me" he says sarcasticly
(Toph returns)
Toph- "Oh so now the two tired people wake up!"
Sokka- "Just because we sleep a little longer than you Toph doesn't mean we are more tired."
Toph- "Yeah whatever, hey where is Katara, I haven't seen her all morning."
Aang- "She's probably down by the river, she likes to practice her waterbending early in the morning."
Toph- "No I don't think so, I was just by the river looking for food, and I didn't see her, and besides she always brings her scrolls down with her to review the basics, and they are still......wait whats that?
(Toph had just looked at katara's sleeping bag and noticed a dagger stabbed into it with a note attached)
Sokka- "I don't know"
(Aang jumps over to the note, rips it off of the dagger and starts furiously reading, while Sokka and toph run over)
(Aang finishes reading the note and immediatly hands it to sokka who reads it aloud to Toph, while aang takes a few steps away from the camp site)
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Alright here is the secound part of part one:
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(Sokka, Toph and Aang are around the camp site, Sokka and toph talk about what to do while Aang seems almost paralyzed by reflection a little farther away from sokka and toph)
(sokka reads)
Dear Children,
When you woke this morning you might have noticed one of your beloved members is missing. The girl is now ours. All of the trouble you Avatar, have put the firenation through, shall be repayed in full on the girl.
FireNation
Toph- "This is terrible!"
Sokka- "Oh no.........Katara.....(he pauses and reflects).....we have got to save her!"
Toph- "She will be tortured for sure! So we've got to do it fast!"
Sokka- "I know! But we need a plan we can't just go charging blindly off in some direction hoping to find her!"
Toph- "Your right................ok plan-guy what do we do?"
Sokka- "Why do you always depend on me to come up with the plan?...................Anyway that doesn't matter now..............Maybe they left a trail, we could look for one"
(Sokka starts wandering in circles)
Sokka- "Do you see anything Toph........oh wait never mind.........well do your feet see anything?"
Toph- "No............Do you see anything Aang?..................Aang?.................AAAAANNNNGG!!!!!!!!!!"
(A strong gust of wind blows randomly from Aang, strong enough to knock both Toph and Sokka back, destroy the camp site, and uproot a couple of trees)
Sokka- (angrily)"Aang what was that ............................................. Oh no!............."
(Sokka turns around to notice the glow in Aang's tatoos and eyes)
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(meanwhile, aboard a firenation ship about three miles out from the river delta (which the group is camped near) the two fire nation soldiers who kidnapped katara walk down one of it's long halls)
-FireNation Soldier 2- ".......I still don't think it was a bright idea for the admiral to kidnap this girl"
-FireNation Soldier 1-"UGGGHHH......How many times do I have to tell you that it was a brilliant Idea"
-FireNation Soldier 2- "Why in the world would you think that?"
-FireNation Soldier 1-"Of course it's a brillieant Idea, She is perfect bait for the avatar, when he comes with his friends to rescue her, BAM!, we drop like a hammer on them and gift wrap them for the fire lord."
-FireNation Soldier 2-"Yeah thats good in theory in all, but what if this girl is the avatar's Concentration, then he will destroy us!"
-Firenation Soldier 1-"Concentration?.......What is this Gibberish?"
-Firenation soldier 2-"The avatar's concentration is the focal point of all of the avatars feelings, especially love. There are ancient stories of the ammount of rage an avatar has unleashed when it's Concentration was taken away or even just hurt, and that is what I am worried about, what IF this girl is his Concentration?"
-Firenation soldier 1-"I don't think so."
(they arrive at the door they were looking for and go in, to find katara chained to a wall)
-Katara- "Let me go!"
-Firenation Soldier 1-"Well well, look who is awake"
(Firenation soldier 2 laughs)
-Katara-"Oh we're not deaf, we definitly heard you, but we are not aloud to do anything until the Admiral comes to look at his new prisoner"
(both firenation soldiers laugh)
-Katara-'Well tell your big-headed admiral to get down here!"
-Admiral-"Why don't you tell me yourself?"
(both firenation soldiers bow in respect)
-Katara-"What no! Your dead!
-Admiral- "Did you miss me Katara?"
-Katara-"ZHAO!!!!"
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Alright, here it is finally: Part 1 of Chapter 2!
---------------
(Aang, Sokka and Toph are at the campsite,Aang has just entered the avatar state and something is different about it, Toph and Sokka are hidden behind a large boulder from the air Aang is bending)
-Sokka: "AAAAAAANNNNNGGGG!!!........Can you hear me?!?!........
dangit........ (to Toph) I don't get it.........I've seen Aang go into the Avatar State at least 5 times, but he has never been this powerful before!"
-Toph: (to Sokka) "Uh, hello (knocks on his head), don't you realize that it is because katara isn't here?"
-Sokka: "What are you talking about?"
-Toph: "Ugh!.........don't tell me that you don't know!"
-Sokka: "Know about what?"
-Toph: "About Aang and Katara!"
-Sokka: "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?"
-Toph: "*sigh*, Your kidding right?"
-Sokka: "NO, JUST TELL ME!"
-Toph: "OK, OK, Aang is in love with Katara!"
-Sokka: "..........Your kidding right?"
-Toph: "Far from it......."
-Sokka: "Well that would explain this........."
(they both pause to look at Aang who is now in the sky surrounded by an air bubble, they are pretty far away from him, but they both can easily tell the look sheer anger and pain in Aang's face)
-Sokka: ".........And how does Katara feel about this."
-Toph: ".......I don't know....."
(something new starts happening, a twister begins to form around Aang, sucking in everything around it, well almost everything)
-Sokka: "WHOA!....... Aangs going to suck us in!"
-Toph: "No he's not!" (she forms an earth tent around them)
-Sokka: "*sigh*......thanks.......but he is going to destroy everything!"
-Toph: "I'm not to sure about that"
-Sokka: "Now what are you talking about?"
-Toph: "It's just the vibrations I'm getting, it feels like he is gaining it's control......."
-Sokka: "..........You are completely insane......." (says sarcasticly)
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(Katara is still chained to the wall, and is forced to talk to Admiral Zhao, the two FireNation Soldiers are there too)
-Katara: "How did you live?!.....And then escape?!"
-Zhao: "Oh it was quite simple really, the monster did not drag me down all the way, but actually dissapated almost just after I entered the freezing water, I swam back up and spotted a dum-witted watertribe so-called warrior, knocked him out from behind, changed into his clothes, and snuck easily out of the tribe, only to find one lucky FireNation battleship unscathed with a perfectly good crew to go along with it, and then I tracked you."
-Katara: "Well then, what do you want with me!?!"
-Zhao: "Have you ever gone fishing before, Katara?"
-Katara: "What are you talking about?"
-Zhao: "Fishing, where you use a hook, line and bait to catch your prey."
-Katara: "Uhh yes, but what does that have to do with anything?"
-Zhao: "My entire plan revolves around this concept, you see, you are the perfect bait for my type of fish."
-Katara: (thinks out loud) "..........Aang!"
-Zhao: "Very good katara, the young Avatar is my prey, and you see, his feelings for you shall cause him to fall victim to my trap, you see my pretty (grabs katara's face and talks into it), as soon as your friends, the Avatar and the rest of your pathetic little gang, discover this so obviously placed ship, 13 garrisons of my best troops shall descend upon them and burn them to a crisp before your friend has anytime at all to even suck in any air."
-Katara: ".......YOU MONSTER!!!" (she starts crying)
(the two firenation soldiers laugh)
-Zhao: ".........and there is not a thing you can do about it"
--Intercom: "Admiral, we're have some strange weather up here."
-Zhao: "I'm on my way, (to the two soldiers) bring the girl."
(they all walk up to the main deck of the ship, with the two soldiers dragging and hurting Katara the entire way"
-Zhao: "What's going on up here?"
-Helmsman: "Well sir, it's that twister in the distance."
-Zhao: "What, but the weather is supposed to be clear skies today, what could have caused this!"
-Katara: (with tears in her eyes, and looking at the twister) "Aang............."
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Well that's it, hope you enjoyed it, I will post Part 2 of Chapter 2 shortly, but please leave comments!!!!!